Thursday, February 14, 2008

Valentine Greet


:::::: Valentine Greet ::::::

Standing on the pair of
balance feet....
listen to the sound
that bird just tweet...

Chilling air blows...
and calm water neat...
Look what is there...
its forming sleet....

fog now spreads
with painting white...
things got vanish
as no one in sight....

Standing on the middle of
lonely street...
look into the eye...
they are lovely sweet...

sun will peek..
will seek some heat...
its a beautiful time..
two hearts will meet...

come dear near...
lets have a seat...
don't talk now..
just hear my beat...

sing this song
as a valentine greet...
follow your heart...
and never ever cheat...

---- Harshal Patil

6 comments:

Nimit Jain said...

Its very strange tht howcome a post like has no comments yet...but thanks junta for giving me the pleasure of being the first one to comment...

And I was told that it was written in F slot class (i.e. in < 50 min !) :)

Harshal hats off to u dude... I m speechless !!! You actually wrote wht i wanted to write myself :)

Keep it up ...

Cheers !!!
Nimit

Tejas Kulkarni said...

Chhan Chhan! :-)

Czar said...

Kyun maar rahe ho sir ?

Dhruv aka Cam said...

Dude... Written pretty well, especially for the aura it creates.
Wht did the person for who you wrote this say... any reactions ..

raghavan_mit_it said...

Hats off harshal ...
[:)]

Muniyandi Ramachandran said...

cool ... great stuff man